Hello
this is Wendy speaking
Who's that
This is Linda
I need some help on writing a resume
Could you please give me some advice
If you are free now
please come to my office and we may have a talk
Thank you
See you soon
Bye
Come in please
Hi Miss Fu
Hi Linda
Please take a seat
Just now you mentioned a resume
So which position are you going to apply for
I'd like to work as an English teacher
and I've learned from the Internet
that there is a vacancy in the Baochuan Primary School
Now I need to work out a resume
Ok I see
When you start with your resume
always include four letters IOEE
that is
Identification Objective Education and Employment
What is identification
As to identification
I mean your personal details
such as your name address
phone number and email address
Ensure every detail is correct
otherwise your employer can't reach you
Yes Miss Fu
I agree identification is important
Then I need to include my job objective
educational background and employment history
Am I right
You are absolutely right
Now you could use my computer to write
your resume here in my office
Please include IOEE in your resume
ok
Miss Fu
Would you please have a look at my resume
Sure I'd love to
You do a good job and do include IOEE
You've provided necessary
personal information here
Look here is a problem with the address
Sorry
I know I should first state our college
and then street name
and then district and city
You are right
Do be careful to avoid this sort of mistakes
There is no problem with your job objective
It's brief and concise
Thanks
I don't think it's necessary to introduce your education
at your senior high school
Instead
your employer will be more interested
in your major at college
Ok
Good
I;m glad that your part time jobs are both
relevant to your job objective
I suggest reversing chronological order
You see
your work experience as a teaching assistant
at Leap English is more important than a tutor
Teaching a group of kids is more challenging
and more closely related to your ideal job
Oh I should use priority order
that is the most important
to the least important
instead of chronological order
That's right
let me improve
Miss Fu
would you please have a look at my resume again
Wow it looks neat and concise
Good
Miss Fu shall I add some other information
It looks thin
Of course
IOEE is essential to a resume
and you may include your achievements
activities awards
special skills interests and so on
It sounds so complicated
Don't be so frustrated
Those are optional
if they can contribute to your future job
you include them
If not
you don't bother at all
Thank you Miss Fu
I got it
Let me see
I will include my award at an English Speech Contest
and my computer skills
You are so smart
You may add them to your resume
and it will be more attractive
One more thing
you'd better give two or three references
at the end of your resume
Ok I see
With the references
my employer can easily contact them
and know more about me
You are right
Remember to use a courtesy title
such as Mr. Dr. and Prof. before each name
and after the name follows the person's title
I will have another try
Perfect
look at your resume
it's brief attractive and readable
I hope that you get the job
Could you summarize the tips that I told you
on writing a resume
Sure
IOEE is necessary to a resume
namely Identification
Objective Education
and Employment
In the section of Identification
it is suggested that
start from the most specific address
to bigger ones
In the section of Education
it is advised to first state our latest educational experience
and then previous educational background
In the section of Employment
it is recommended that
share our major experiences first
and then move to minor ones
Besides IOEE
achievements activities awards special skills
interests and so on could be included
At the end of a resume
it will be helpful to give two or three references
Remember that it's polite
to use titles when referring to someone
Good
Thanks a lot for your help
Bye